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  • Toddler Teaches…ANIMALS GO VROOM!

    Toddler Teaches…ANIMALS GO VROOM!

    It is only fitting that the first deep dive into my toddler’s favorite books is the brilliant Animals Go Vroom! by Abi Cushman. Animals Go Vroom! has been in a two-way tie for S’s favorite book for months, right from the moment S pulled it off a library shelf and was so transfixed we had to make it S’s first library book. Here’s why:

    1. Surprising, Interactive Page Turns that Follow a Pattern
    2. Active, Interactive Illustrations
    3. Combining Two Favorite Subjects (Animals and Transportation)
    4. Fun Animal and Transportation Sounds
    5. Evocative Word Choices in Short Sentences

    Each spread in the book follows the same interactive pattern. The left side of the book contains an animal sound seemingly related to an animal visible through a cut out on the right side of the book. The text invites the reader to guess what is making the sound, and to turn the page to finish the sentence.

    A huge thank you to Abi Cushman for providing the high quality book images for use in this blog!

    And when you turn the page …

    You see that the animal sound wasn’t an animal sound at all, but a transportation sound!

    S LOVES this. S loves saying “roar” and all the other fun sounds in the book (“hiss” and “awoooooooooo” are particular favorites). S loves the surprise page turns, and the fact that they follow a predictable pattern, which heightens the suspense and excitement of each page turn. S also loves turning the pages by jamming one hand into the cutouts (a fun textural element!) while I hold my breath and silently thank the publisher for using sturdy paper.

    Animals Go Vroom! is also a favorite because it does a lot to keep S’s attention.

    Sentences are short, punchy, and active, with juicy word choices and alliteration. The truck doesn’t drive up the road – it rumbles. The unicycle doesn’t roll past the traffic – it teeters. The words aren’t just fun to say – they also sound like their meanings, which combined with the illustrations have added to S’s vocabulary.

    Complementing the text, the illustrations are active, bright, and colorful. They also include a lot of background details for us to sink our teeth into and engage with as we read.

    S loves to point out the hat on the tiger in both the “hidden” and fully revealed spreads above. In the spread below, she likes to point out the hippo (a favorite animal) and the picnic, bread, and cheese.

    The images in the story also build off each other, with whole stories happening in the illustrations. It’s both world building and word building. On each page, S and I can discuss everything that is going on beyond the text on the page. The detail in the illustrations also offers a lot of new, easy, and exciting words to learn and/or practice. In the unicycle spread alone, we have a mouse in a helmet riding with a cupcake; the baby crow has a toy; the mommy crow has bread, grapes, cheese, and a bag; there are hippos and snakes and owls; the painter is in a hat….

    These details not only make the story more interactive, but S’s interest in pointing them out builds vocabulary that S enjoys utilizing the next time we read the book.

    Put simply, there’s a reason why S requests this book multiple times a week. Check it out – I hope you love it as much as we do!

    Some quick stats on Animals Go Vroom!:

    Page count: 30 pages of what I would consider the “main” book

    Word count: 70

    Average word count per illustration: 4.67 (I have a hunch that word count per illustration is going to be lowest in the books we read the most, so I’ll be tracking that over time. Check back to see how that hypothesis holds up….)

  • Welcome to Toddler Teaches Writing!

    Hi everyone – thanks for checking out my blog, Toddler Teaches Writing! With a toddler at home, I read a lot of books. We are mostly still in the board book phase, but every so often a picture book becomes such a runaway winner that I can’t help but take note. This blog is about the ways that reading to my kiddo “Sam” is informing the ways I think about my own writing. I hope it helps you too!

    I will eventually do deep dives on Sam’s favorite picture books and what makes them winners, but for my inaugural post, I thought I’d go overarching and write about some of the commonalities in Sam’s favorites. So, without further ado, how to appeal to my under 2 year old:

    1. Pick a topic S knows (and loves)

    The most surefire way to get a repeat reading request is to pick a subject S knows and loves. Examples include: animals (any kind, but especially dogs and horses), vehicles (buses, airplanes, bulldozers, and excavators preferred), and food.

    Chana Stiefel’s Bravo, Avocado! is a winner because it features one of S’s favorite foods as the main character (and because of the gorgeous, active illustrations)

    Sam is constantly learning new things, and is also delighted by book subjects that enable showing off those new skills. This runs the gamut from alphabet books (ex: Chicka Chicka, Boom Boom) to pretty much anything else you can think of – if S has recently learned about it, S is excited to see it in print.

    A recent winner in this regard is Andrew Larsen’s The Bagel King, which I took out of the library for my own research days after Sam tried a bagel for the first time. S was ecstatic to read about bagels, and loved pointing out the bagels in the book.

    The Bagel King

    2. Have bright, active illustrations with relatable extras/background

    At this stage, while the text matters, the illustrations are pretty much make or break for S’s willingness to sit through a 32 page book. Illustrations engage S best when they are bright, active, and keep it moving (ex: multiple panels on a spread or lots of action and background to engage with), and when they have “cute” main characters.

    Shannon Hale and LeUyen Pham’s Itty-Bitty Kitty Corn is the paradigmatic example of hitting every note here – a fluffy, adorable main character, lots of action and motion, and many active images on a single page.

    Lots of our “winner” books also include additional things in the illustrations that S likes and can point out, even when not directly related to the words on the page. The Bagel King contains a full two page spread that has a dog and a bicycle, neither of which are directly related to the action, but which S loves to point out. Same goes for hats on characters and other things that enable S to use new vocabulary words to engage with the book as I’m reading it.

    I have also been surprised by how much S loves end pages. They tend to have lots of different kinds of pictures, and encapsulate the main thrust of the book in one easily accessible spot, making them particularly fun places to turn to and point out main characters or key objects.

    The vibrant end pages in Little Dumplings by Susan Rich Brooke and Bonnie Pang are a big hit.

    3. Use refrains

    Refrains are a great way to encourage interaction and feed into the general toddler love of repetition. When we get to a refrain, I can pause and S can “read” the story. Fun, easy to say words also fit this bill – S knows when they are coming and can interject those too, or have fun repeating them after I read them.

    “Chicka Chicka”
    “Boom Boom!”

    4. Use onomatopoeia

    Onomatopoeia is a value add to many of our repeat books, though not as broadly as I expected. If it’s an animal sound (“neigh,” “hiss,” “buzz”) it’s almost guaranteed to get interaction and a re-read request. But if it’s a somewhat random sound, the sound of something S isn’t familiar with (like a typewriter), or a “splat” type sound, it is less appealing right now.

    5. Keep it short

    The best books for us at this stage are ones that keep it short and active. 1-2 short, punchy sentences per page is ideal. (Really 1 sentence if you can swing it.) Anything longer and S winds up turning the page on me, or I have to make up something about the illustration rather than reading the actual text.

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    I’d love to hear about the books that make the grade with the young readers in your lives. Drop them in the comments (depending on how you got here, you may need to click on the link in the post title to see the comment section), and they may make a separate blog post some day!

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